Flowing feathers and group comments 26th September
As this Friday will be the last Micro-Macro session, I asked
myself, how far have I come?
I started today with more then half the paper still to cover
and very little time to do it, but I was determined to finish. I started by using
white chalk to make quick smooth lines on the paper. As I continued working on
my drawing, I realised I wasn't as apprehensive as I was three weeks ago. I
found the large scale easier and less daunting now. I was also working a lot
quicker.


As others took a break, I decided to work through. I wanted
to finish as I was focused and didn't want to break my concentration. With each
stroke of the white chalk I tried to follow the movement of the feather,
blending in each line before going over it again to brighten it even more. I
did that for a while until I hit a staple sticking out of the wall. I hit it
with my hand and it pierced my paper. I stood there shocked and annoyed. Why was
there a staple on the wall pointing out towards the room? Luckily it was only a
small hole and after pulling the staple out, I covered the white that was
showing through with more black. The hole couldn't be seen when you stood back,
but I knew it was there. I then went over the rest of the wall for any more
stray staples lying in wait to ruin my work. After finding three, I was happy
to try and finish my work.
I was almost finished when I was told we were to do a group
critique. This was something I was dreading as I'm not keen on everyone staring
at me, but as it was talking about the process of making my work, I wasn't too
worried. As I was talking, I remembered to speak clearly and to choose my words
carefully. I told the group about the process, as well as my thoughts, problems
and what led me to do the finally piece. After I finished speaking, the group made
comments. They were all very helpful and positive.
Sadly I didn't get to finish the work, but the parts I had
done, I was happy with. I tried to achieve a smooth flow and feeling of
lightness. I also wanted to show the contrast of white and black, and the strength
of the spine of the feather and the light softness of it. It was a interesting journey
from start to finish, and I was pleased with the end result.
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